Good Haiku
An old silent pond... A frog jumps into the pond, splash! Silence again. As Ms.Guarino mentioned, people are not only looking for the rhymes, but also the connections in each line. We can see in this poem that the three sentences, or phrases are related. The first one gives a brief introduction, then it explains the story. I think this one is good because it creates a really good image that I can imagine easily: an old silent pond, a frog jumps in, and it became silent. The situation is easy for us to think. The poem also has several rhymes, pond as the rhythm in the first two sentences. A mountain village under the piled-up snow the sound of water. I really like the poem with many scenes. For example, the mountain village, the piled-up snow and the sound of water, we all can see the scenery of a small mountain village, filled with snow and crystalline. It must be a really beautiful mountain. Yet, this could also depict the scenery of spring, representing how the organism start...