Good Haiku

An old silent pond...
A frog jumps into the pond,
splash! Silence again.
As Ms.Guarino mentioned, people are not only looking for the rhymes, but also the connections in each line. We can see in this poem that the three sentences, or phrases are related. The first one gives a brief introduction, then it explains the story. I think this one is good because it creates a really good image that I can imagine easily: an old silent pond, a frog jumps in, and it became silent. The situation is easy for us to think. The poem also has several rhymes, pond as the rhythm in the first two sentences.

A mountain village
under the piled-up snow
the sound of water.
I really like the poem with many scenes. For example, the mountain village, the piled-up snow and the sound of water, we all can see the scenery of a small mountain village, filled with snow and crystalline. It must be a really beautiful mountain. Yet, this could also depict the scenery of spring, representing how the organism start to grow because of the snow melts as water. This poem gives us a well-developed view of a village.

Most importantly, I enjoy to stay in these kind of scenery, watching the view from early spring to summer made me feel relax and free.

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