what do you need to revise on your drafts to show more clarity, conviction, commitment, emotion, and overall strengthen your performance? Be specific on what you need to revise and why. 300 words. My Character in the combining stories is Lili and the night women. These two ladies are the same in most of the condition, but different in their personality. For capturing both, I have to perform both in some ways, yet having more in Lili's section because the main focus or the main storyline is from Lili. When I read the story, I think Lili is a woman who has her own determination, idea. In other words, she is independent and strong. This results in the tragedy of the suicide of Guy. She always forces Guy to do things. As a result, she can act a little forceful as well because she wants to secure the future of Little Guy's. On the other hand, She always suspects Guy or seldom cares about Guy's situation; the only thing in her consideration is Little Guy's future. I thin...