Helen's performance

After so many weeks, I finally opened my paper. Then, I think I have so many things to work on now. Also based on the rubic, I found many flaws from my essay here. My biggest problem is that I miss a bunch of staff. After I read through my partner’s paragraph. He has a really clear thesis statement about what he is going to talk about next, but I think I don’t actually have one. After my introductory background about the situation of the family, I immediately jumped into the themes and the personality of the family. However, I didn’t have a clear sentence that point out my topic. As a result, I should create a clear thesis statement about my essay because thesis statement must have in order to let the audience see the point you are making in the paragraphs. A thesis statement should be short and detailed with all the informations that you are going to say. Personally, I then will have a thesis statement about the annoyance of  Amanda and the endless fighting on the stage, feeling ...

We went through every single performance on Friday and Monday. Everyone has its own interpretation about its poem. Everyone also improve a lot in the final draft. Personally, the good qualities for good video are putting yourself in that moment. Whatever your poem wants to convey, you need to put your emotions into the poem such as sad, happy, hesitate, lively…etc. Feel free to use those adjectives to summarize your poem. Then, you can perform well on the stage by giving more understanding of happy, sad or angry.  For example, my poem is emphasizing the sadness and love, so I can put my head down,hug myself just to emanate the sadness. At first, my only feeling is sad, so I lowered my voice to do that. Then, I become sadder and disappointed as to point out the hopelessness, so I become louder. In order to let people to feel the same that I did. Moreover, loud is another good quality that stands. Once you are loud, everyone can hear your words clearly. They don’t have to guess what...