My evalution
This month, we created some video about the book, The Glass Menagerie. Then, we need to write a paper to the IB about what we want to do in this performance, including literal analysis, performance, and video performance. I think my reflection is not that good. First of all, I wrote a lot about the literal analysis rather than the performance because I analyze Amanda’s personality based on the texts in the book. Yet, I didn’t really have a lot of performances from the analysis, so I think I should write more about what I can do in the performance, deleting some of my literal analysis. Mentioning too much can be so repetitive in the paper so it will look messy. Moreover, I need to have more specific evidence to support my point, adding more performances. However, I think my structure is reasonable because I can mention she is an annoying person or controlled person, then giving by specific evidence to show that, afterward, I can think of some movement that she can do during the performances. However, it might be a little messy due to some people might write the literal analysis first, then they will focus more on the movement that they could do. Moreover, I didn’t write about the actual performance we did on the day. If I have to include that and all the props, the costume we have, it will be a large number of words. As a result, I will work on deleting words for my analysis.
Literal Analysis: 4
Performance: 6(Didn't include much about the performances)
Language: 4( Need to be well-organized by having my interpretation, then write the performances)
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