Second Draft

-Story
A wall of Fire Rising+The Night Women (Combination)
What happened after Guy died
When we read, the connection is really apparent
I like the personality traits of Lili-strong and independent, also, night women's love towards her son: soft and caring.
Literary Analysis
-Theme: love, hate, and sacrifice
-Character: Lili
Relationship: Lili and Guy(love and hate)
Lili and Little Guy(selfless love)
-Conflict:
Lili and Guy(whether Little Guy should work or study)
Lili and Little Guy(the same as before)
Lili vs. herself
Adaptation:
Love and caring
Staging:
Our version talks mainly about the sacrifice that Lili gives to her son and her family, and love towards her son. As a result, Lili mostly softens her voice to Little Guy. Whenever he has any problem, she will encourage him to the end. However, I think Lili is not only a strong and independent woman. She also needs love, selfless acts, and caring. As a result, when she sees Guy, she will act nervous, disappointed, and sad. 
Blocking
-Black Box( flexible)
-used the triangles to show the separation
-the darker side for Lili
-When Little Guy is arguing about whether to work, he tries to go to my side to show his growth as an adult, willingness to work for the family, but I pull him to the brighter side to show my eagerness of not willing to let him even fall.
Performances
-started with a soft voice to expose my love toward my son; 
-responded with a gentle voice
-sat with Little Guy on the bed to show the connections
-patted his back and looked at him gently. 
-when Guy is there, I lower my head
- crying, frowning, yelling to him
-I also fiddle my hands to show nervous
- pushing him to show my anger
-trilling my voice to show my sadness
-when he is gone, I sat on my bed to show my sadness
-when Little Guy wants to work, my voice becomes less gentle, but tougher
-I yelled at him
-my voice gets serious: saying lines straight and quick and direct
-after I found out my son will be left, I say it with a more gentle voice 
-I sat on the ground to show helplessness

Evaluation will be the same
Improvements:
I can actually put on the crying emotions into the performances. 
I can act closer toward Josh so that it can be clear that we were couple
Did well:
When I had my work down, I clean my cloth and I acted like I wasn't expecting Little Guy to wake up(the surprise)
Also, when Little Guy woke me up after he saw the angel, my reaction is kind of right for just waking up. 
What I HAVE LEARNED:
The culture and political information about Haiti
To also be creative
How to create lines
About the role of a woman in the Haiti society
How to cooperate with my classmates
Props
Easy props-showing the Haitian family and the poverty in the family
Book-education 
Flower-mourning
Different beds between me and Little Guy( further shows sacrifice)



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